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Neuron: Intelligent suit to discover customers from social networks

by veermishra0803 on 10/20/14, 8:12 AM with 1 comments

Neuron will examine your entire social networks (Facebook, Instagram, Twitter & Pinterest), pick up those users on platform who are interested in your type of products and help you convert them into your customers.

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by ColinWright on 10/20/14, 9:17 AM
I think, then, that you mean "Intelligent suite ..."
I for one, baulk at the term "intelligent" in this context. It's over-used, over-hyped, and invariably under-delivers.
However, assuming you actually have something useful and interesting, might I suggest that you either get a copy-editor or proof reader to help hone your text. Your copy is your display window - if people see "mistakes" then the message can get lost or ignored.
A good article with specific examples will go a long way. Generalities don't sell - a story that resonates with your intended market is what sells.
Finally, I can't respond to the call to
```
    "Share your views on this product of mine."
```
because I haven't used it, am unlikely to want it, and can see no reason why I should invest my time to investigate it. You need to convince me that it's a trivial investment of time to be able to assess it enough. That's your challenge.