by miki_tyler on 6/11/25, 11:51 PM with 82 comments
The story follows two voices: - Ulysses, a present-day archaeologist who finds a glowing slate in the dig site. - Marcus, an educated household slave in 79 AD who replies on that slate.
Why I’m posting:
I’d love narrative feedback. – Does the story make sense? – Are Ulysses and Marcus believable? – Which directions would you explore next (politics, tech, moral fallout)?
What’s live today - First issue, 25 rough pages. - No paywall; just a PDF.
Next steps
Regular releases toward a 8 or 10 issues collection. I’ll revise based on your critiques and wild speculations.
Grateful for any thoughts on pacing, historical plausibility, or character depth.
Thanks for reading!
by ilinx on 6/12/25, 1:53 AM
by adrianmonk on 6/12/25, 2:31 AM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rome,_Sweet_Rome
I think this is the original Reddit thread:
https://www.reddit.com/r/AskReddit/comments/k067x/could_i_de...
by prennert on 6/12/25, 7:36 AM
There might be some inspiration in there to guide the story towards breaking some of the chicken and egg problems. Maybe the Romans find a way (and reason) to exploit the English coal deposits and start encountering the same problems the English did eventually: how to pump water out of shafts.
by tene80i on 6/12/25, 5:06 AM
I do understand that it allows people to be creative in areas they don’t have skill. I can imagine sensibilities changing over time, even if just between generations, in the way Douglas Adams described. Or maybe, as this sort of thing becomes rampant, people will seek even more the authenticity of human craft, despite / because of all its flaws, the challenge of doing it well, and the awe and human connection that results.
by ggm on 6/12/25, 12:40 AM
by Tagbert on 6/12/25, 3:45 AM
by jcranmer on 6/12/25, 3:53 AM
Originally, I thought you were suggesting an endogenous Roman industrial revolution, which, no, that's not historically plausible (see https://acoup.blog/2022/08/26/collections-why-no-roman-indus... for details as to why). But on a closer reread, I found that you're talking instead about Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur's Court-style introduction of the Industrial Revolution to the past. Which... probably still no?
There's a few factors that make Roman Industrial Revolution unlikely. It's dubious that the Romans had the technology to make a working pressure cylinder necessary for a steam engine--that requires some degree of precision engineering that I don't think they had. But there's other missing technologies: for examples, the Romans lack the spinning wheel (it would be invented ~1000 years later), and even more importantly, their looms likely aren't up to the production capacity that automatic thread production would enable. It's not implausible that this is part of future-tech-transfer, but getting this tech transferred would require a decent amount of specialized knowledge not easily available to either person here.
More importantly, I don't think the Roman economy is really at a stage that can handle an industrial revolution. Most production is still relying essentially on local production. A shortage of wool workers isn't an "oh no, we have too much wool, how ever are we going to turn it into yarn?" problem; rather, it's a "whelp, we've got nobody to deal with all the sheep" problem.
The final note is that your plan for the inevitable old-versus-new conflict is... well, "industrial revolution turns everyone into Revolutionary American liberals" is a summary of that idea, and I don't think that's anywhere near an accurate read of what a Roman reaction to an industrial revolution. I'd go into more detail, but I don't trust my own knowledge of the 1st century Roman Empire sociopolitical structure is accurate enough to model what it would look like in detail.
by ilamont on 6/12/25, 4:35 AM
by quuxplusone on 6/12/25, 5:32 PM
(1) The art style is 100% "WikiHow meme", when I think you were probably (or should have been) shooting for "ligne claire". It's... distracting, at least. The facial expressions in particular are WikiHow-style.
(2) I can't quite read that "handwritten note" on page 14, nor is it explained to the reader how the protagonist figures out what date it is ("A.D.") for the Roman he thinks he's time-travel-talking to. Nor why he immediately jumps to time travel paradoxes; wouldn't it be obvious at first that this is, at weirdest, some sort of MMAcevedo situation, not a magic time travel communicator? Or is that my HN bias showing?
by don-code on 6/12/25, 1:51 AM
by rbanffy on 6/12/25, 12:37 PM
by tomrod on 6/12/25, 2:26 AM
by satvikpendem on 6/12/25, 3:55 AM
by Animats on 6/12/25, 3:19 AM
by notavalleyman on 6/12/25, 2:30 AM
The MC's hair colour and stubble change between the first three frames and everything has that yellow sheen.
by cellis on 6/12/25, 3:02 AM
by 90s_dev on 6/12/25, 2:25 AM
by kristopolous on 6/12/25, 2:02 AM
by huangjingyun on 6/12/25, 3:29 AM
by Findeton on 6/12/25, 2:33 AM
Years since the founding of the City (Rome), Ab Urbe Condita. Although during Imperial times they used years since the current emperor started his mandate, ehich could be confusing as sometimes there would be three emperors in a year.
Btw I loved the comic and I will anxiously wait for the next edition.