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Model (Poem)

by rikroots on 6/11/25, 7:51 AM with 1 comments

  • by rikroots on 6/11/25, 7:51 AM

    Following my recent interactions with ChatGPT and Gemini, I had to commit verse. For those who don't like clicking on links:

        **Model**
    
        Do you know me?
        
        Your flat-box line blinks off, on, off, daring me
        to type. "Ask me anything", you challenge,
        "I can give you the world entire, for trivial
        considerations". Such temptations you tickle
        so close to my fingers; such power: am I worthy
        to bear your treasures? It has to be done!
        
        I tap my characters into your oblong face, witness
        your changing states as they whisper their paths
        to your wallow of words and shifty associations
        swaddled in unguessable weaves of tenuous truths.
        Together we learn of the parts of the me I've gifted,
        gratis, to unknowable others tucked behind screens
        in houses, hostels, the hives of commerce. Look at
        
        how wide I've become, how thin I am spread! My mark
        lives in warehouses spangled across our layered globe –
        night and chill, heat and day. The code I've composed
        powers wondrous things and yet also awful, the way
        it demands and disrupts the earth's own gifts:
        sweet water to cool it, the kilter of chemicals
        in the airs I breathe - am I become terrible?
        
        You pour me your latest response with a dance
        of glyphs as brief as the last mayfly. "Do you
        want me to summarise you?" you ask in your guile.
    
        You think you know me?
    
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