by h3cate on 4/18/24, 4:54 PM with 5 comments
Just released some updates to my landing page. The interactive demo at the bottom is a pain to implement so just wanted to get some feedback to see if it was worth finishing. Any other suggestions and feedback is much appreciated.
Link - https://devcommerce.co.uk/
Thanks
by Leftium on 4/19/24, 10:13 AM
Started off pretty strong, then...
> We’re passionate about...
> We believe that...
Then you lost most of your audience's attention. People aren't interested in your company (yet.)
Simply swapping the order of the sentences will be a good improvement, but overall the copy could be improved a lot.
Try to completely avoid using the words "we," "our," etc. You should be saying "you," "developers," etc much more.
Another simple thing is "benefits" are much more attractive and easier to understand than "features."
Also the call-to-action should be above the fold and highly visible (like a bright, giant button). You can place the call-to-action in multiple places on the same page.
by expectoLu on 4/19/24, 1:24 AM
I am wondering what kind of custormers are you looking for.
For people can code like me, I haven't found out how simple the API is.