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Ask HN: Roast My Website: Rewrote the Copy

by fotoflo on 4/13/24, 8:00 AM with 4 comments

Hi guys, I was having trouble with a lot of people not understanding the key points my product seeks to address. Can I ask you to roast it?

https://fastmonitor.io

Thanks!

  • by sfmz on 4/13/24, 1:23 PM

    Typefont isn't very good.

    "The Web's Best Collaborative Monitoring Tool" The only words that make sense in this sentence are "monitoring tool".

    Which stakeholders are collaborating? In what way is it the best?

    How are charts going to "continuosly [sic] improve performance" << continuously is the word, you should use a spell-checker.