by jgilliam on 4/6/11, 10:04 PM with 93 comments
by spking on 4/6/11, 10:34 PM
by gokhan on 4/6/11, 11:34 PM
- Landing page does not tell me what the site is about. Who is it for? Something like the one suggested by @spking needed.
- Carousel is too fast for me. It should also pause on hover to let me check.
- Heroku and AWS is most probably unknown to your target userbase. You should drop it from the carousel, IMO.
- Not urgent, but you should work on the YSlow score. Lots of the scripts are unnecessary for the landing page.
- Make the hover animations on the "features" pages discoverable. No one will notice them.
- Can't you make a shorter version of the screencast and put it on the landing page?
Overall, there are lots of features inside, but screenshots are too crowded and copy is not helping much in the landing page.
For example, there's a lot going on in this screenshot and there are many screenshots like this one in the landing page carousel (http://nationbuilder.s3.amazonaws.com/3dna/pages/36/features...). You have many features, but select something simple and stick to it for the landing page.
by neilk on 4/6/11, 11:22 PM
Looks great to me, although I have not tried it (since it's 100% integration work, devil is in the details). Seems that you've done this before and built the app you would have wanted.
by asnyder on 4/6/11, 10:26 PM
I thought it was a good idea then, and an even better idea now. I think NationBuilder did a great job. Needless to say the potential client got cold feet, and never executed their idea.
by specialist on 4/7/11, 12:20 AM
Have you worked on any political campaigns? Candidates, issues, activism, anything? I have. Your NationBuilder is not yet a full product.
Pitch your product to local campaign managers. That's the fastest way for you to get your course correction.
Campaigns do need better tools. So I encourage you to keep at it.
(If you're wondering why I just don't tell you what you need, I'm working on a business plan for something very similar. Also, I'd rather you earned the domain knowledge firsthand.)
by mahmud on 4/6/11, 11:10 PM
Only problem I see is the pricing. You should be doing 4x what you currently have.
by Nate75Sanders on 4/6/11, 10:38 PM
by emiranda on 4/6/11, 11:11 PM
by Tiktaalik on 4/6/11, 11:34 PM
Certainly these new candidates are starting the campaign flat footed with regards to their web presence and social media strategy and this favours the long established incumbents. This service could fix that and get new candidates that haven't had time to prepare up and running as soon as possible.
by fourspace on 4/6/11, 11:13 PM
Looks like there's an errant "Edit this page" link under the sidebar here: http://nationbuilder.com/features
by epnk on 4/6/11, 11:36 PM
I had a bit of a bad initial reaction when I heard the name, however, as it feels very imperialist and negative to me. Might just be me though, so just take it as a single datapoint. But my suggestion would be to look into names that are a little more positive.
by dangravell on 4/7/11, 8:46 AM
When I arrived at the site I had no idea what it was for. After reading the first and second pages I _still_ had no idea what it was for... but for some reason I didn't care. I began to form this idea in my head that 'nations' referred to 'eco systems' and that this site was a fully integrated Internet presence for a startup. E.g. an easy way to have a Web site, forums, integrate social networking into everything and have it all beautiful at the same time.
It was only once I read the HN comments that I realised it was for a more political market. It just amused me that looking down that sidebar I made pretty much everything in my head apply to startups... "co-ordinate volunteers? are they talking about open source projects?" ;-)
Anyway, those are just my initial thoughts. A very interesting vertical you've _actually_ aimed for.
by bdclimber14 on 4/6/11, 11:29 PM
Another commenter said 4x, I'd say 10x plus an upfront fee.
However, I could be wrong, please correct me if you've done trials and found this to be the best price :)
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by lordlarm on 4/7/11, 9:56 AM
When I accept the flashanimation it works, but you may want to look into it sometime.
And btw: the "start your trial button" looks (in my opinion) more like web 1.0 than 2.0, with all those gradients and strong colors.
Keep it up, looks good!
by Maciek416 on 4/6/11, 11:04 PM
I'm looking forward to hearing how well this takes off, especially with the pricing plans currently in place. I have an idea for a political action campaign, but I'm kinda on the fence with your lowest tier price.
by mryall on 4/6/11, 10:50 PM
by nethsix on 4/7/11, 12:19 AM
by m0dE on 4/7/11, 3:43 AM
by impendia on 4/7/11, 12:02 AM
by jacques_chester on 4/6/11, 10:44 PM
by Tycho on 4/7/11, 10:53 AM
(if so then I can't believe nobody's used the word 'dashboard' yet)
by petervandijck on 4/6/11, 10:58 PM
by ssebro on 4/6/11, 11:34 PM
by ssebro on 4/6/11, 11:37 PM
by epaulson on 4/7/11, 12:55 AM
by jdp23 on 4/7/11, 1:13 AM
by pitdesi on 4/6/11, 11:36 PM
I like the idea, I think it makes a lot of sense and this market probably really needs this sort of thing... that being said, I don't know the market AT ALL.
Give me a shout if you want to talk payments, we can probably help you figure out the best way to manage that.
by ddkrone on 4/6/11, 10:48 PM